Friday, July 10, 2015

Murder in Room 16. Episode Two

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Officer Rose Bamidele was led to the manager office by an elderly woman which was the cleaner. She sat down to wait for him in his small office with a table and two chairs. A big clock on his green painted wall. The tall and dark skinned manager, Mr Osaro walked in after two minutes and apologized for keeping her waiting. He sat on his chair opposite her.

"I was told by Nkechi you wanted to speak with me."Osaro said.

"Yes." she said. "If I may ask where were you?"

"I went out for a smoke. I'm stressed up officer. I can't believe someone died here. It's bad for business."

Rose had promised to keep Nkechi out of her conversation with him. "Where were you between 3pm to 6pm today.

His jaw dropped. "What do you mean by that?"

"Please answer my question."

His eyes turned wild. "Are you suspecting I killed that man? He was one of my regular customers which was good for business!"

Officer Rose remained calmed. "Are you having a guilty conscience because I never accused you of murder."

He signed. "How could I have gone to room 16 to commit such an abhorrent crime. I was in my office through out that time."

"Is there anyone that can prove it's true?"

"I have an alibi." he said in an angry tone. "I had a visitor, a friend of mine." He opened his drawer and tore out a piece of paper to write down the number of the person that visited him. Mr. Osaro gave it to her.

She dialed the number on her phone to call his friend and his alibi checked out.

Osaro shrugged. "There's something I should let you know." he said. "With the little I know Mr. Kelechi had problem with two people. First, one of my bar men Dele. They were always having issues with each other. In fact they quarreled almost all the time. I heard they use to be class mates back in the past."

"I need to talk to him"

"You will but he took permission from me to go home briefly. He will be back soon."

"What about the second person?" she asked.

"His wife."

Rose widened her eyes. "He was married? No wedding ring was found on him and Nkechi never mentioned that to me."

"I don't think she knew he was attached because when his wife came last week to threaten to kill him she wasn't the one at the reception that day. I have two other receptionist."

"But how do I get his wife contact? I only have the address to his place of work. His phone was not in room 16."

"Dele should have it."

Rose rose on her feet. She showed Mr. Osaro the necklace and asked him if he had seen it before. He glared at it closely and shook his head. As she turned to leave he spoke.

"But officer why would you have suspected me? Mr. Kelechi never wronged me."

"That's irrelevant but don't leave town until the case is solved."

 He stood up.  "I'm not going anywhere officer."

She took his phone number and gave the manager her card. Rose had it in mind to summon his wife for questioning the following day and whatever she says would determine whether to let the cat out of the bag.

She went to question Dele, a lanky looking guy with small eyes. The color of his lips was black as charcoal. He was been questioned, standing close to the bar section.

"I'm innocent! he barked. "I would never have killed Kelechi, he was my friend!"

"But you were not at the bar through out today."

"I strolled out!"

"But you two were always fighting?"

He cleared his throat. "That's because he owned me money."

"Money?" she asked him surprised.

"Yes." he answered saucily. "I borrowed him my life savings because he was in debts with loan he borrowed from the bank. He's car business wasn't booming any longer. He refused to pay me back after everything got settled."

"So when you saw him lavishing money on women and booze you snapped and killed him."

He smiled faintly and shook his head pitifully. His eyes shot at her. "If I was the one who killed him how am I going to get my money back?"

A question with no answer.

At 9:30 pm, Rose arrived at the station to write a report before heading home. She called the victim's wife who didn't sound remorseful on the phone. She promised to see Rose at the station the next morning. Rose walked to her car to leave when her phone ranged. She glanced at it to pick. It was the manager calling.

"Office Rose!" he called out her name crying. "I'm finished!"

"What is it Mr. Osaro?" she asked curiously and worried.

"My wife!" he blurted out. "I just got home to find my wife stabbed! I can't find a pulse. She's dead!"
To be continued......


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  2. Its indeed a great and suspense filled read, great effort and look forward to the concluding part.

  3. OMG am suspecting the victim's wife


  4. Thanks for your comment. Episode 3 will be posted tomorrow.

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  6. Lips sealed! @scribes pad Thanks 4Ur comment!

  7. miss cuteJuly 21, 2015

    I have a raised eyebrows for the manager. I think he knew something was up.

  8. Really? You will find out soon! Thanks 4ur comment.

  9. I Don ready for the story now


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